Student or Learner
I'm writing an essay about the importance of role modele in our lives and I would like to write such a sentence: "Having a role model, helps us to set certain goals as we know what we want to achieve and to whom we would like to be similar". Is this sentence ok? Or maybe is it better to say "...who we would like to be as successful as"?
Delete the comma after 'model' and both endings are OK.