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    Could you check my message for grammatical mistakes and informal style, please?) Her

    Greetings to you chelleve.My name is Maria Deidrick,I am from Jamaica St Elizebeth,but is living in Birmingham England.Frist I must say I commend you for the good work you are doing in the body of Christ. Which is why I am messaging you.I am an independent gospel singer/song writter and is hoping to record a single in jamaica in December.,heard of your studio and is interested in doing it there,so if that is possible I would really appreciate it if you would let me know.Thanks in advance

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    Re: Could you check my message for grammatical mistakes and informal style, please?)

    Welcome to the forum.

    The first thing you should do is click on "Edit Post" and add a space after every full stop and comma. Then click Save.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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