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    #1

    sentence

    Hello!
    Could you lend a helping hand?
    I want say: "When they went to a store and Jane went to the toilet there with her trouble occurred after which she really needed a show." I think that there is something wrong.
    Thank you.

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    #2

    Re: sentence

    Your sentence does not make any sense. You need to rephrase it.

    Olga, you cannot continue giving your threads the same useless title.

    A better title for this would have been When they went to a store.

    Extract from the Posting Guidelines:

    'Thread titles should include all or part of the word/phrase being discussed.'



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    #3

    Re: sentence

    Try writing shorter sentences. I don't know what kind of show one would need after using the toilet, nor what you mean by "trouble."

  2. Boris Tatarenko's Avatar
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    #4

    Re: sentence

    P.S You can send me this sentence in PM in Russian.
    Please, correct all my mistakes. I should know English perfectly and if you show me my mistakes I will achieve my dream a little bit faster. A lot of thanks.

    Not a teacher nor a native speaker.

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    #5

    Re: sentence

    Boris, I don't think Olga can PM you until she has made ten posts.

    She could post the sentence in Russian on the Other Languages forum.

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