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    #1

    Help me

    Hello
    Could you help me please?
    I am not sure of the correctness of my sentence: The main aim our programme predict and correct the problemin the future datefor the mistakes of employees?


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    #2

    Re: Help me

    Welcome to the forums.

    I'm afraid your sentence makes little sense. Please try to explain what it is you are trying to say.

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    #3

    Re: Help me

    I tried to tell that the main aim our programme find the error and fix it.

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    #4

    Re: Help me

    I'm afraid the only part of your sentence I can understand is that you want to describe the objective of your program.

    You want to predict and correct something. I don't know what.

    Can you use other words to decribe the program's goal/objective/aim?
    I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.

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    #5

    Re: Help me

    By the way, welcome to Using English.
    However, please note that you thread title is not helpful ("The aim of our program" would be a good title."
    And also note that we like to be asked for help, not instructed to help you. "Find the error and fix it" is rather rude.
    I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.

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    #6

    Re: Help me

    How about:

    The main aim of our programme is to predict and correct future problems caused by employees' mistakes.

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