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    Lightbulb can you correct my journal ?

    Can you correct my journal ?


    Today we have writing test . The writing course that we took it was very important for us
    because it improved our writing . When I came to the college I was quite reassured about
    the test but I found in it some difficulties . This is not because I did not study well or that
    the teacher did not taught us well but I think we don't have sufficient background . I think
    we should read more to improve our writing .We should read magazine , newspaper , and
    everything else .

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    Re: can you correct my journal ?

    ***NOT A TEACHER***

    For a start, please follow the rules of written English:

    - Do not put a space before a full stop, comma, question mark or exclamation mark.
    - Always put a space after a full stop, comma, question mark or exclamation mark.
    (emsr2d2)

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    Re: can you correct my journal ?

    Thank you.
    but are there any mistakes in grammar?

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    Re: can you correct my journal ?

    When are you going to submit your journal to a teacher or tutor for marking? A journal is usually homework or an assignment.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: can you correct my journal ?

    I heard it is not allowed members to submit their homework or assignment in there. Should you pay attention on this.

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    Re: can you correct my journal ?

    Quote Originally Posted by Polyester View Post
    I heard it is not allowed members to submit their homework or assignment in there. Should you pay attention on this.
    You are right. That is why I asked you if it was homework. An alarming number of people choose to completely ignore our "no homework" rule!

    Your first post looks very odd. Is there some reason why the words do not stretch all the way across the text box? Please click Edit Post and tidy it up. And, as OdessaDawn already told you, we don't put a space before a full stop or a comma. While you're editing your post, you can correct that too.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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