[Essay] can you correct my journal ?

[جوهرة النهمي]

Can you correct my journal ?


Today we have writing test . The writing course that we took it was very important for us
because it improved our writing . When I came to the college I was quite reassured about
the test but I found in it some difficulties . This is not because I did not study well or that
the teacher did not taught us well but I think we don't have sufficient background . I think
we should read more to improve our writing .We should read magazine , newspaper , and
everything else .

 

[Odessa Dawn]

***NOT A TEACHER***

For a start, please follow the rules of written English:

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- Do not put a space before a full stop, comma, question mark or exclamation mark.
- Always put a space after a full stop, comma, question mark or exclamation mark.
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(emsr2d2)
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[جوهرة النهمي]

Thank you.
but are there any mistakes in grammar?

 

[emsr2d2]

When are you going to submit your journal to a teacher or tutor for marking? A journal is usually homework or an assignment.

 

[Polyester]

I heard it is not allowed members to submit their homework or assignment in there. Should you pay attention on this.

 

[emsr2d2]

I heard it is not allowed members to submit their homework or assignment in there. Should you pay attention on this.

You are right. That is why I asked you if it was homework. An alarming number of people choose to completely ignore our "no homework" rule!

Your first post looks very odd. Is there some reason why the words do not stretch all the way across the text box? Please click Edit Post and tidy it up. And, as OdessaDawn already told you, we don't put a space before a full stop or a comma. While you're editing your post, you can correct that too.