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    #1

    Question Is that right?

    Hi, everyone!

    Read the sentence: "While talking, she draws something on the wall with the blood-stained finger."

    Is this correct?

    P.S. The blood did not come from her finger. The blood was not taken from her body. Is the blood of an animal!

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    #2

    Re: Is that right?

    The sentence is grammatically correct.

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    #3

    Re: Is that right?

    A better title would have been The blood-stained finger.


    'Thread titles should include all or part of the word/phrase being discussed.'

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    #4

    Re: Is that right?

    I would write "her" finger, not "the" finger unless it was an amputated digit.
    I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.

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    #5

    Re: Is that right?

    If you use the, she only had blood on one finger. I would use her too.

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    #6

    Re: Is that right?

    I would use "her" or "a/one".
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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