as well ass VS similarly vs correspondingly

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Which of them? I think all of them could be correct.

Tourism brings much needed money to developing countries. ......, it provides employment.
1. as well as
2. similarly
3. correspondingly
 

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I am not a teacher.

1. is definitely wrong.

2. and 3. are grammatically correct, but I don't like them.

You might want to edit the 'ass' in the thread title.
 

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What's wrong with as well as?
 

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'As well as' means 'in addition to'.

Not a teacher.
 

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What about furthermore?
 

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How about moreover?
 

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I like 'furthermore' and 'moreover'.

None of the given alternatives is natural, and they should all begin with a capital letter as they follow a full stop (period).

The presence of the comma precludes the use of 'as well as'.
 

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Tourism brings much needed money as well as many employments to developing countries.

Is it correct?
 

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No. 'Employment' is uncountable.
 

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That is a different use. This is an unusual use of "employment" as a plural to emphasize that the individual may have pensions from more than one previous job.
 

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SIGH...if only I'd added '...in this context' in post 11.:-(
 

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Assuming 'brings jobs' is correct, why is 'brings employments' incorrect in this context?
 

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