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    Theater conversation

    Hi There,

    Is the conversation below correct?

    I : May I ask you a question or two before I get myself in the long queue?
    Cashier : Yes, you may.
    I : Will Transformer still be showing on this coming Saturday?
    Cashier : Yes.
    I : Can I buy the ticket of Saturday shows today?
    Cashier : No, you can only buy the ticket of Saturday shows on Wednesday at the earliest.

    Thanks in advance.
    Last edited by seanlim; 30-Jun-2014 at 09:55. Reason: Incorrect capitalise

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    Re: Theater conversation

    It's not correct because you have not capitalised the word "I" each time, nor have you capitalised the title of the film. Correct those first and then we can look at the content.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: Theater conversation

    Hi emsr2d2,

    Sorry for the capitalization, I have edited it.

    Thank you
    Last edited by seanlim; 30-Jun-2014 at 10:28.

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    Re: Theater conversation

    Quote Originally Posted by seanlim View Post
    Hi There there.

    Is the conversation below correct?

    Me : May I ask you a question or two before I get myself in the long queue?
    Cashier : Yes, you may.
    Me : Will "Transformers" still be showing on this coming Saturday?
    Cashier : Yes.
    Me : Can I buy the tickets/a ticket of for a Saturday shows show today?
    Cashier : No, you can only buy the tickets/a ticket of for a Saturday shows show on Wednesday at the earliest.

    Thanks in advance.
    See above.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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