Dear teachers, please tell me whether the following corrections are correct.
As you said you have an account with the National Bank too, have you deposited $1200/- which I lent you on January 1, 2014? Since our accounts are of different branches in the same bank, you need not come to my branch to make the deposit. You just fill in a pay-in slip with my account details and give the cash to the cashier who will then give you a stamped pay-in slip. Please remember that it should be stamped with 'CASH'.
I am not a teacher.
Student or Learner