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  1. Newbie
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    Hi ,

    I am applying for one Exam where I need to write Letter under 150 Words in 20 mins.
    I have written the following , please verify and let me know the changes required in terms of accuracy , grammar , and spelling

    Q -

    I have recently moved to a different house.
    Write a letter to an English- speaking friend. in you letter

    1- Explain why you have moved
    2- Describe the new house
    3- Invite your friend to come and visit


    Dear Ravi,

    Hope this letter finds you in good health.I am happy to inform you that, I have moved to another house in the same locality.

    As I might mentioned to you earlier that my parents are coming here next month end.Therefore I started searching a little bigger house which will give us enough space for our family.

    Fortunately, I have found a good house near my previous apartment; which is having a big mater bedroom with ample of light coming from its window,modular kitchen , another bedroom for my parents, a store room and two bathrooms in it.

    I am pleased to invite you for a small party ; which I will be organising 15th of next month.It will also help us to meet again after a long duration.Please try to come with you family and kids.

    Hoping to hear from you soon.

    Your Faithfully,
    Mayank Khare

  2. Barb_D's Avatar
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    So this is your practice letter?
    I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.

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