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    #1

    Please correct

    Dear girls!
    I offer you the services, in weaving of festive and daily braids. It is convenient, practical and it is fashionable!
    Hairdresses on the basis of braids.

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    #2

    Re: Please correct

    Perhaps:

    The braids last a long time, and they are pretty.



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    #3

    Re: Please correct

    Quote Originally Posted by Elenap123 View Post
    I offer you the services, in weaving of festive and daily braids.
    Can I suggest "Give us this day our daily braid" as a motto?

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    Re: Please correct

    I'm inclined to compliment that suggestion with a series of "plait-itudes".
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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