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  1. Newbie
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    #1

    Which one is correct or better?

    This is a title and I'd like to know which one is better English, I'm sure 1 + 3 are fine, but 2 seems wrong.
    1. The Retirement Savings you didn't know you had.
    2. The Retirement Savings your didn't know you have.
    3. The Retirement Savings you don't know you have.

    Thank you.

  2. MikeNewYork's Avatar
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    #2

    Re: Which one is correct or better?

    The second is wrong.

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    #3

    Re: Which one is correct or better?

    rerlou, please note that a better title would have been The retirement savings.

    (I don't see a reason to capitalise 'retirement savings'.)

    Extract from the Posting Guidelines:

    'Thread titles should include all or part of the word/phrase being discussed.'

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