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    Fail to jump over the gate

    Hi there,
    Kindly check the grammar and description of the story below.

    I and my friend went to our friend’s. One site of the gate has already opened, but my friend intended to jump over the close one and fail.
    Me : Hey pal, why you are doing this when the gate has already opened.
    Friend : I thought I could make it. Shit…, it’s really hurt. Help me!

    Thank you

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    Re: Fail to jump over the gate

    Quote Originally Posted by seanlim View Post
    Hi there,
    Kindly check the grammar and description of the story below.

    I and My friend and I went to our friend’s. One site side of the [double] gate has had already been opened (or "was already open"), but my friend intended tried to jump over the closed one and failed.

    Me : Hey pal, why you are doing this did you do that when the gate has was already opened open?
    Friend : I thought I could make it. Sh*t! it’s That really hurt. Help me!

    Thank you.
    There is no description of your story. You are just asking us to check the grammar (and the capitalisation, punctuation etc).

    Please see my changes above in red.

    You need to go back and revise the usage of "open/closed" (adjective) and "to open/to close" (verbs).
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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