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    clink-clank

    I can't describe the sound of a metal object striking the ground. Are the following sentences correct? Or please help me rewrite them. Thank you a lot.

    Michelle was a smartphone addict. One day while she was walking along the sidewalk, her eyes were glued to the screen, single-mindedly playing a mobile game. Before she knew it, she walked faster and faster, only to bump into a huge tree by the sidewalk. She got a bad cut over her left eye, and her phone fell onto the sidewalk with "clink-clank!"

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    Re: clink-clank

    ...her phone fell onto the sidewalk with a big thud.

    "Clink-clank" or "clinkety-clank" is more metal-to-metal or hard objects hitting metal objects.



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