[Essay] True/false values

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Hello,

I would be grateful, if someone could check this opinion essay and make some useful sugestions. The subject is as following:

Many people are concerned with with false rather than true values
 

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Hello,

I would be grateful (no comma required here) if someone could check this opinion essay and make some useful suggestions. The subject is: [strike]as following:[/strike] Many people are concerned with [strike]with[/strike] false rather than true values.

You have only given us the title, not the essay. When must you submit your essay to your teacher/tutor for marking or grading?
 

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I would be grateful if someone could check this opinion essay and make some useful suggestions. The subject is: Many people are concerned with with false rather than true values.
A value is something that a specific person respects and affectively regards.There are true and false values, the thing is to know which is which.True values are those which help us to grow spiritually like:respect,morality,wisdom,love,faith etc.False values are those that make us do bad things like:selfishness,greed,harm,revenge,violence.Nowadays many people are concerned with false rather than true values.I think that there are two things that make people concern with false values:money and power.Many people aspire to have these things and to achive their goal they do terrible things.But each of us can change this thing because individual values are built up through life, experience,environment and family background.So we must teach our children the importance of true values that will make them good persons and to make them realize that false values can't make persons proud of themselves.
 
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When must you submit your essay to your teacher?

Yes, when?

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Then we wish you good luck. We cannot help with homework or assignments. All work you submit to your teacher must be your own work. If you submit work you have had help with, your teacher will not know where your strengths and weaknesses lie and won't be able to help you effectively.

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