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    Announcement for training

    Morning sir/mdm,

    could you please check the contain of this email? is it true if i use the word when we announce to the staffs to attend the training?
    __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ _______________________

    Dear all,

    We are pleased to inform you that the following personnel have been selected to attend the above in-house course scheduled on 14th August 2014 - 15th August 2014. Detail is as follows:-

    Venue : Integrity Room, TDC
    Time : 8.00am - 5.00pm

    Please take note that in case of withdrawal (due to acceptable and valid reasons), kindly inform us immediately so that appropriate replacement can be arranged.

    Thank you.

    Regards,
    Farhana Jafylee

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    Re: Announcement for training

    Quote Originally Posted by Maruko Chan View Post
    Good morning.

    Could you please check the content of this email? Is it true that if i use the word [What word?] when we announce to the staff this training session,.... [If phrases should be followed by a comma and a then phrase: "If I use the word, then....what"]?
    __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ _______________________

    Dear staff:

    We are pleased to inform you that the following people [What people?] have been selected to attend the above [Above what?] in-house course scheduled from 14th August, 2014, to 15th August, 2014. The details are as follows:

    Venue : Integrity Room, TDC
    Time : 8.00am - 5.00pm

    Please take note that in case of withdrawal (due to acceptable and valid reasons), you should inform us immediately so that an appropriate replacement can be arranged.

    Thank you.

    Regards,
    Farhana Jafylee
    1. What is the word you are asking about?
    2. You started to ask an if question but did not finish it. If you use a word, then...what?

    Can you rephrase what you are trying to ask?

    Thank you!

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