Please help me correct the following wording. Thanks!

After you mentioned what you had come for, the bank clerk immediately offered to lend you help. He examined your account and verified that the next day the remittance from Taiwan had been transferred into your account. However, the sum of money was wired in USD, not RMB, so when you insert your cash card into the ATM of Bank of China, it won’t show the remittance. You have to withdraw the amount of money in USD from the bank first, and then exchange it to RMB and deposit it in your account of the bank. So that you may use your cash card to withdraw the money you want at the ATM of Bank of China.