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    #1

    " In this summer....

    I want to know if in my sentence word order is correctly used.

    Eg.: In this following summer the main target for the people working in the tourism sector, are Ukrainian tourists.

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    #2

    Re: " In this summer....

    No. It's messy, wordy and incomprehensible.

    Next/This summer, the tourism sector will be targeting the Ukrainian market.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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