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    Post Can someone help me revise this short answer for college applications?

    I recall people telling me I should be a lawyer as far back as when I was seven years old, and how I have a talent in speech. This would remain in the back of my mind for the rest of my life. Conversely, my experience in Mock Trial as well as co-founding the Speech and Debate Club at my school would all but concretely solidify those prospects. After experiencing events, I am genuinely interested.

    The question is What are your career goals and how did you develop them?
    By the way, there is a 400 character cap on the response.
    In case it wasn't already self-evident, and please let me know if it isn't, my chief answer was Lawyer.

    Thanks again, any and all feedback is sincerely appreciated.

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    Re: Can someone help me revise this short answer for college applications?

    Quote Originally Posted by insertsax View Post
    After experiencing events, I am genuinely interested.
    What events are you taking about experiencing? (You are genuinely interested in becoming a lawyer, right?)


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