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    Communications via school booklet

    English teacher

    My apologies if this is not the correct forum for my thread.
    I’m posting here because yesterday I opened a thread which is connected to this one.

    Could you please have a look at the following paragraph and suggest improvements, if needed?

    Communications via school booklet. Disciplinary actions will be sent home via school booklet and must be signed by a parent The booklet must be returned when indicated. If you do not return it, you will immediately progress to the next disciplinary action.

    Thank you.
    WW
    Last edited by emsr2d2; 23-Aug-2014 at 23:11. Reason: Sorted out formatting.

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    Re: Communications via school booklet

    You can't send a disciplinary action to somebody's house by means of a school booklet. You can send a notice of a disciplinary action to somebody's house.

    Last edited by emsr2d2; 23-Aug-2014 at 23:12. Reason: Sorted out formatting

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    Re: Communications via school booklet

    Thanks a lot Tarheel.
    So, would "a notice about disciplinary actions will be sent home" be correct?
    Would you use "by means of" insetad of the preposition "via"?

    WW
    Last edited by Walt Whitman; 23-Aug-2014 at 23:04.

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    Re: Communications via school booklet

    Parents will be notified of disciplinary action by means of a booklet. A parent/The parents must sign the booklet and return it to the school by the date shown. If this is not done, the child will immediately be moved to the next disciplinary level.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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