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    #1

    a employment letter

    pls can somebody correct my letter content.
    Last edited by premathunga; 26-Aug-2014 at 22:12.

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    #2

    Re: a employment letter

    First, I looked at my last post (in the other thread), and I noticed a spelling mistake. I guess nobody's perfect.

    Please notice the format.

    Say:
    Dear Sir:

    I hereby inform you that Mrs. Laxshmi had been appointed as a medical officer in grade 11.... (I can't understand the rest, so I can't comment about it.)


    Say:

    Miss Laxshmi successfully completed her probation period, and the position was made permanent.

    Last edited by emsr2d2; 25-Aug-2014 at 16:39. Reason: Minor typo

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