Student or Learner
I've found the following:
1. The day when my dream will come true might come.
Should #1 be written as follows?
2. The day might come when my dream will come true.
Or, both are correct?
Thank you very much in advance for your help on this.
I find sentence #2 much more natural. In sentence #1, the two instances of "come" are very close together and it sounds awkward. Of course, you could just say "One day, my dream might come true".
Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.