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    Talking Writing a formal letter to a university to inquire more information

    Dear Sir or Madam,

    This is to request more information about your Medical course at Heidelberg university. I am extremely interested in this course and I am anxious to apply for it in your renowned university for the academic year 2015/2016.

    First, I would like to inquire about qualifications, in particular the average desired for acceptance and enrollment. Moreover,
    I would be grateful if you could indicate the academic entry requirements of Heidelberg University for the international students.
    Second, I would greatly appreciate some information about the types and conditions for a scholarship (considering an average of 17.5/20).
    Third, are there any tuition fees? What are the annual costs in the medical field for a bachelors degree including a flat, transportation, books and insurance?

    Thank you in advance for your attention to my request. I look forward to receiving your response.

    Yours sincerely,
    (First and last name)

    QUESTION FOR READERS:
    Should i include my high school name and grade? this letter's purpose is to inquire information about the requirements for enrollment, obtaining a scholarship and annual costs. Anything to add or illustrate? Thank you for your time!


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    Re: Writing a formal letter to a university to inquire more information

    You want to ask for information, not inquire information. (If you wish to thank me you can click the "Thank" button.)

    (I believe it should be Heidelberg University.)

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    Re: Writing a formal letter to a university to inquire more information

    P.S. I did a Google search, and bachelors degree is spelled both with and without the apostrophe.


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    Re: Writing a formal letter to a university to inquire more information

    Please help me and corrects me errors, Poorly know English, please help me i want it urgently

    Motivation Letter
    Your Name: Koka Kotia
    Private number: 29001035823
    MA Registration Number: 401013985
    E-mail address: kokakotia@yahoo.com
    Telephone number: 599107754
    Dear sirs,
    I wish to apply to the Master of Business Administration program at Ilia State University for the 2014 autumn intake. This program is a solid step towards my future career as a businessperson who understands and appreciates science and technology. The master program of your university is the best instrument to deepen my knowledge in the relevant fields of business administration and to succeed in achieving my goal.
    There are three key reasons why I want to study at this program. First, I selected your program because of its primary focus on business with the expectation that students already possess a strong understanding of science. Second, a fellow student of the program, has provided me with his thoughts about the program. From our conversations, I became excited to learn about the courses such as management. And last, I wish to grow to be a manager who can combine the science of technology with the art of management. Aside from the favorable learning environment of Ilia State University, I most enjoyed its academic freedoms and active pluralism. The Economist has a unique vision of the world of style. My goal is to develop and refine our thinking in this style as possible, to give a wider scope of my education. It means a chance to see some in-depth theoretical and practical issues, which I'm sure will play a key role in the master's degree.
    My future plan next five year is to start a career as Business Analyst. The master program of your university is the best instrument to deepen my knowledge in the relevant fields of managment and information technology and to succeed in achieving my goal. It furthermore provides the chance to study in an international environment which will be important for enhancing my intercultural competence and language skills.
    I believe that this Master Program will contribute to the evolution of my career as it suits perfectly with my future goals, It also would allow me to develop my skills. I am sure that studying the courses included in this Master Program will let me better understand how to take strategic decisions and how to provide competitive responses. Ilia State University graduate program provides the specific knowledge and skills that are essential to achieving these goals. I hope that I will become a worthy member of the ISU academic environment.

    I want to write about one problems of export, which is very important for our country. Specifically, I would like to draw your attention to the fruit and vegetable exports. Georgian fruit and vegetables sold in local markets due to low demand complicated. Export fewer products undergo a major reason for the Russian market halt. I think first of all it is necessary to solve this problem is to open up the EU market, otherwise it will be a local problem. The Russian market is closed for us, in my opinion superior to the EU market. The consumer market for Georgian products is not satisfactory. Importantly, the political will is there. Construction of cold storage facility will allow us to keep the fruits of the season and in the winter to export. I think we need to develop an export program that will protect the local market and farmers.

    Thank you for your attention and consideration. I look forward to your acceptance.

    Yours sincerely, Date: 27.08.2014
    Koka Kotia

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    Re: Writing a formal letter to a university to inquire more information

    Perhaps some moderator will come by soon and start a new thread with this one.

    Quote Originally Posted by koka001 View Post
    Please help me and corrects me errors, Poorly know English, please help me i want it urgently
    Perhaps:

    Please help me, and correct my errors. My English skills are not good. Please help me! It is urgent that I get this done quickly.


    Please note that all the instruction on this site is done by volunteers. When you post something with so much text in it a person is likely to take one look and say, "Oh no!"

    However, maybe I will come back at look at it some more later. With a new question you should starry a new thread.)


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