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    My first writing. what you think of it.

    Hi all
    here is my first writing I am willing to see your feedback about. Thanks

    A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the factory? Explain your position.


    My response:
    Factory around community area
    The company has the right to build any project in anywhere they want. In addition, the community has the right to stand up against any factory that work without safety or careless of public health in the community. Nowadays, jobs become rare and no much offer out there for people. Having a factory around people will open the door for positions for worker, who suffering from jobless. Community need to pay the price for that and give a company some sort of permissions to get advantages. But the permissions needs to be more conservative in subject of public health, so rules have to be made and keeping people’s health in good shape without any interface affecting their health. Ultimately, seeing a factory around the community is not an issue, in my opinion. The question that must be rising is the company following the safety plan and their business has any negative side of people’s life?

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    Re: My first writing. what you think of it.

    This is somebody's homework. You are to state what your opinion is and then give reasons to support your opinion. We are not supposed to do your homework.


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    #3

    Re: My first writing. what you think of it.

    When are you going to submit this essay to your teacher/tutor?
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: My first writing. what you think of it.

    writing topics.pdfwriting topics.pdf

    I do this writing in my own I wiling to improve my writing. see the attachment I uploaded it. it has many topic I pick up one topic and I write about it. No school no teacher. It is me for me only.

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    #6

    Re: My first writing. what you think of it.

    I remember this same assignment from years ago. At least try something else. Something original.


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