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    Question Could you check this paragraphs ?

    Could you check this paragraphs grammatically ? Please.
    Last edited by PriestessOfTheMoon; 29-Aug-2014 at 00:30. Reason: Done.

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    Re: Could you check this paragraphs ?

    Welcome to the forum.

    Many of us are wary of opening external links from unknown sources. Please write your work in a post so that we can read it directly from this screen and make amendments on screen.

    I had a quick look at your paragraphs and noticed that you have omitted a lot of articles and some verbs. Have a good look at it again before you post it here.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: Could you check this paragraphs ?

    Okay I'll check .

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