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    Sentence correction > I could not bear with humiliating and disgracing .......

    We started sharing my husband's relative's house but after few days, I could not bear with the humiliating and disgracing behaviour of his relatives and decided to leave the house and rent somewhere else far away from that location where I could not see their faces again.

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    Re: Sentence correction > I could not bear with humiliating and disgracing .......

    We stayed with some of my husband's relatives, but after only a few days we could not bear their humiliating and disgraceful behavior. We decided to move out and rent a place far away, where we would not have to see their faces again.
    I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.

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    Re: Sentence correction > I could not bear with humiliating and disgracing .......

    Barb, you may be right, but from the OP's sentence it sounds as if the wife left on her own.

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    Re: Sentence correction > I could not bear with humiliating and disgracing .......

    I debated over the I/we thing and decided the OP could correct that part if it were wrong.
    I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.

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