Please help me correct the sentences. Thanks! (#1, #2 are extracted/rewritten from an article of a blog.)
1. This surge of Korean cultural popularity has been called “Hallyu.”
2. It means Korean wave and refers to the wide popularity of Korean TV, film and music has become a global crazy.
3. Naturally, K-pop takes my school by storm.
I think it has become a "global craze".
Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.
I combined these sentences to form a paragraph as written. Is it adequate to put the adverb 'Naturally' before the sentence 'K-pop has....'?
This surge of Korean cultural popularity has been called “Hallyu.” It means Korean wave and means that Korean TV, film and music has become a global craze. Naturally, K-pop has taken my school by storm. Watching Korean soap operas has become a national activity, and discussing the story and screenplay of the soap operas is a common topic of conversation among students and teachers.
Last edited by lotus888; 31-Aug-2014 at 06:21.