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    #1

    Letter correction for inscription as specialist

    Dear Sir/ Madam,

    could you please, correct this letter?

    I thank you a lot for your help.

    Regards.

    Alejandro


    Dear Sir/ Madam,

    I am writing in order to request information about theregistration as specialist.

    I am a fully registered medical practitioner with a licenceto practise and I wouldlike to get registration as Specialist.

    Could you, please, indicate the next step in order to get it?

    I thank you for your help.

    I am looking forward to hearing from you.

    Yours faithfully.

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    #2

    Re: Letter correction for inscription as specialist

    Quote Originally Posted by Alejo38 View Post


    Dear Sir/ Madam,

    I am writing in order to request information about the registration as a specialist.

    I am a fully registered medical practitioner with a license to practise, and I would like to register as a specialist.

    Could you please indicate the next step to take?

    I am looking forward to hearing from you.

    Yours faithfully.
    Shouldn't you indicate what kind of medical practitioner you are and what kind of specialist you want to become?


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    #3

    Re: Letter correction for inscription as specialist

    Quote Originally Posted by Alejo38 View Post




    Dear Sir/ Madam,

    I would like to know how to register as a specialist.

    I am a registered medical practitioner specializing in ophthalmology.

    Thank you for your help.




    Sincerely yours,


    George Washington

    ***** NOT A TEACHER *****

    NOTES:

    1. Thanks to Tarheel for his suggestion that you mention your specialty.
    2. I think that learners and even some native speakers make a big mistake by starting a letter with the words "I am writing ...."




    James

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    #4

    Re: Letter correction for inscription as specialist

    Thank you very much!!

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