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    Would you please correct my text?

    This study explored the relationship between framing mechanisms, which are used in the media image formation, and social relationships between Arabs and Americans.
    The study depended on survey method to get data and information about the mutual images between Arab and Americans, and analysis these images to determine its relationship with social relationships between Arabs and Americans.
    The researcher performed a meta-analysis of ( 22 ) studies that handled the mutual media images between the Arab world and United States of America from 1916 to 2011. The researcher conducted an online survey, the survey sample consisted of ( 321 ) respondents from ( 12 ) Arab countries, and ( 354 ) respondents from united states of America.
    The results revealed that the foreign policy of the United States of America determines the uses of farming mechanisms by Arab and American media. The results indicated that framing mechanisms adoption is significantly associated with mutual images, social relationships, and attitudes toward violence.
    These results demonstrate the role of media in shifting the "clash of civilizations" from theory to fact that controls the international relations and social relationships between Arabs and Americans.
    The results indicated that the religious affiliation influences framing mechanisms adoption, mutual images, social relationships, and attitudes toward violence.

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    Re: Would you please correct my text?

    Quote Originally Posted by Arab researcher View Post
    This study explored the relationship between framing mechanisms, which are used in the media image formation, and social relationships between Arabs and Americans.
    I am not sure that you should have the in the media image formation, since I am not sure what you are trying to say.

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    Re: Would you please correct my text?

    Hi,
    Thank you so much for your reply.
    I mean "the formation of media images".
    Are there any mistakes else?
    Thanks again.

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    Re: Would you please correct my text?

    Quote Originally Posted by Arab researcher View Post
    This study explored the relationship between framing mechanisms, which are used in the media image formation, and social relationships between Arabs and Americans.
    I am still not sure what that sentence says, but I am pretty sure that is how it should look.

    You need to make that at least two paragraphs. When you use parentheses, do not space between the parentheses and the text inside (for instance, do it like this).

    It is hard for me to understand what you are trying to say, so that makes it hard for me to give you suggestions. (I tried to find a definition for "framing mechanism" but what I found does not, I am sure, apply here.)


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    Re: Would you please correct my text?

    Quote Originally Posted by Arab researcher View Post
    The study depended on survey methods (What kind?) to get data and information (Data and information are really the same thing.) about the mutual images between Arabs and Americans, and analyzed those images to determine their relationship with social relationships between Arabs and Americans.
    The researcher performed a meta-analysis of ( 22 ) studies that handled the mutual media images between the Arab world and United States of America from 1916 to 2011.
    You don't need the parentheses bracketing "22" in the second sentence.


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    Thank you so much for your reply.
    Best wishes,

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    Re: Would you please correct my text?

    Quote Originally Posted by Arab researcher View Post
    Thank you so much for your reply.
    Best wishes,
    You can use the "Thanks" button to express appreciation (without posting again). (Most of that went right over my head.)


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