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    I need help to rewrite a sentence.

    America and Freedom, Josh Canty, and the Naval Academy both feel right.

    I need to rewrite this sentence and remove third person. Not sure how best to do this and still make the point.

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    #2

    Re: I need help to rewrite a sentence.

    Welcome to the forum, jcanty.

    Do you mean you're referring to yourself in the 'third person'? The first person is 'I'. The word 'both' refers to two items; the sentence says that four items feel right.

    In what sense do they feel right?

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    Please note that a better title would have been
    Josh Canty.

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    'Thread titles should include all or part of the word/phrase being discussed.'

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