America and Freedom, Josh Canty, and the Naval Academy – both feel right.
I need to rewrite this sentence and remove third person. Not sure how best to do this and still make the point.
Welcome to the forum, jcanty.
Do you mean you're referring to yourself in the 'third person'? The first person is 'I'. The word 'both' refers to two items; the sentence says that four items feel right.
In what sense do they feel right?
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Please note that a better title would have been Josh Canty.
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