Dear Sir/ Madam,

could you please, correct this letter?

With the reference to above subject and further to our meeting with the Engineer yesterday, I have enclosed the following for your peruse and review
- Modified plan after incorporate the main road

-NOC letter form client addressed to Authority

Furthermore,we really appreciate your efforts trying to convince the Eng with regards to the same .
Eventually, wish to know from your good-self the expected response time limit for closing time

Thank you .