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    Could You Please Check My Translation Revision ?

    Hi all !

    I've been working as an export personnel for a textile firm in Turkey. There were several traslation mistakes on the website and i've just revised it all. Could you please check my translation ?

    Thanks in advance...


    ''The Turkish Towel whose existence had been begun with the costruction of The Hammams in the 14th century and which is woven by hand weaving looms in the early part of 18th century depending on geographical position and historical development of our city, has maintained it’s development until today.

    As ..... Textile, we have been serving the industry, tourism, advertising and etc sectors for domestic and export markets since 1982.

    We stand by our customers with our high quality products, fast & frank service and qualified personnel in the sector for 31 years.

    We offer you innovative and creative solutions making no concessions on our quality, ethical values and reliability based business sense aiming for high customer satisfaction.

    ..... Textile, who has 900 tons annual production capacity is able to increase it by 20% based on demand.

    All the products are made of 100% cotton yarn by high technology electronic dobby and jacquard weaving looms.

    We believe that we meet companies special demand upon their orders with the products that we manufacture by jacquard weaving and all kinds of embroidery.

    While producing jacquard woven, embroidered and rotation printed towels with logo for promotion companies and hotels; we also manufacture eyelets, guipures and dobby woven fringed towels for stores, based on domestic and export market requests.

    “Promotion” is a loanword from French which has meanings such as increasing and growing.

    In our country, whenever the word ‘’Promotion’’ is mentioned, the first thing that comes to mind is the souvenir. But promotion is not a souvenir, it’s an advertising tool which carries your firm to every field of life.

    Companies use promotional products in order to introduce themselves and their products to the world and build connections with potential customers. In this context, many products are counted as promotional and presented to people.

    Couldn't decide which one is more suitable from the following;

    - Promotion is the product on which your brand name and logo exist.
    - Promotion is the product which has your brand name and logo on it. ''

    They work 7/24 for you in order to make your name and provide permanency on the market.

    Promotional products;

    • Provides acknowledgement,
    • Helps your brand name stick in minds,
    • Provides you to be with your customer all the time,
    • Helps you establish an unbreakable mutual relation,
    • Introduces your brand name to the world,
    • Universalizes your logo,
    • Brings your brand to life,

    As ..... Textile, we stand by you valued customers offering our towels with wide area of usage.

    Measurement standards of our products;

    30x30 - 30x50 - 50x70 - 50x80 - 50x90 - 50x100 - 70x140 - 70x150 - 100x150 - 100x180 and; as long as 30-50-70 cm sides are kept stable, we are able to produce the adverse sides in any desired measure.

    We’re able to produce Yarn Dyed and Fabric Dyed Towels with the weight range of between 320 gr/sqmt and 1000 gr/sqmt

    Based on domestic and export market requests, we produce jacquard woven, embroidered and rotation printed towels with logo for promotion companies and eyelets, guipures and dobby woven fringed towels for stores.''

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    Re: Could You Please Check My Translation Revision ?

    Quote Originally Posted by Abarth View Post


    I've been working as an export worker for a textile firm in Turkey. There were several traslation mistakes on the website, and i've just revised it all. Could you please check my translation?

    Thanks in advance...


    ''The Turkish Towel, whose existence began with the construction of The Hammams in the 14th century and which was woven by hand weaving looms in the early part of 18th century depending on geographical position and historical development of our city, has maintained its development until today.
    That's all for now.


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    Re: Could You Please Check My Translation Revision ?

    Quote Originally Posted by Tarheel View Post
    That's all for now.

    Thank you for the correction. Could you please check it all :)

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    Re: Could You Please Check My Translation Revision ?

    My time had run out. I had to get off the computer.

    As for personnel, that is one of those words that is always plural. For example, the maintenance personnel are the people on staff who do maintenance.

    Quote Originally Posted by Abarth View Post

    As ..... Textile, we have been serving the tourism, advertising and other sectors for domestic and export markets since 1982.

    We stand by our customers with our high quality products, fast & frank service and qualified personnel in the sector for 31 years.

    We offer you innovative and creative solutions ​(Solutions to what?)making no concessions on our quality, ethical values and reliability based business sense aiming for high customer satisfaction. (Perhaps: "Quality is number one with us. We do everything we can to achieve customer satisfaction.")

    ..... Textile, who has 900 tons annual production capacity, is able to increase it by 20% based on demand.

    All the products are made of 100% cotton yarn by high-tech electronic dobby and jacquard weaving looms.
    More later.

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    Re: Could You Please Check My Translation Revision ?

    Quote Originally Posted by Tarheel View Post
    My time had run out. I had to get off the computer.

    As for personnel, that is one of those words that is always plural. For example, the maintenance personnel are the people on staff who do maintenance.



    More later.
    I'll be waiting for more :) I understand what you mean about personnel. Meanwhile I use thank button insteading of writing here, please don't misunderstand :)

    Also i mean promotional and advertising solution.
    Last edited by Abarth; 18-Sep-2014 at 11:01.

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    Re: Could You Please Check My Translation Revision ?

    You can't have solutions without problems to solve.

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    Re: Could You Please Check My Translation Revision ?

    Quote Originally Posted by Abarth View Post

    We stand by our customers with our high quality products, fast & frank service and qualified personnel in the sector for 31 years.
    You can't have fast and frank service. How about fast and efficient?


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    Re: Could You Please Check My Translation Revision ?

    Quote Originally Posted by Abarth View Post



    ..... Textile, who has 900 tons annual production capacity is able to increase its production capacity by 20% based on demand.

    All of our products are made of 100% cotton yarn by high-tech electronic dobby and jacquard weaving looms.

    We believe that we meet any special demands with the products that we manufacture by jacquard weaving and all kinds of embroidery.
    I believe I am making progress.


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    Re: Could You Please Check My Translation Revision ?

    Quote Originally Posted by Abarth View Post

    While producing jacquard woven, embroidered and rotation printed towels with logos for promotion companies and hotels; we also manufacture eyelets, guipures and dobby woven fringed towels for stores, based on domestic and export market requests.
    What is a promotion company? (I would like to change that, but I am not sure what to change it to.)

    Quote Originally Posted by Abarth View Post
    “Promotion” is a loanword from French which has meanings such as "increasing" and "growing".

    In our country, whenever the word ‘’Promotion’’ is mentioned, the first thing that comes to mind is the souvenir. But promotion is not a souvenir, it’s an advertising tool which takes your brand name everywhere.


    Quote Originally Posted by Abarth View Post
    Companies use promotional products in order to introduce themselves and their products to the world and build connections with potential customers. In this context, many products are considered promotional and presented to people.
    Now we are getting somewhere.


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    Re: Could You Please Check My Translation Revision ?

    We've finished half of it, go on please

    Promotion companies sell a wide variety of customized advertising materials with logo, from textile to stationery materials such as pencil.

    For example; we produced towel with Samsung logo but we didn't sell it directly to Samsung. We sold it to the promotion company and they sold it to Samsung

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