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    rediscovered

    Please help me correct the following paragraph. Thanks!

    Winter Sonata, a K-drama series that aired in 2002, stars Bae Yong-joon and Choe Jiwoo. It is widely considered to be the Korean drama that launched the Korean Wave throughout Asia and worldwide. It has made an unnoticed small island Namiseom, a primary outdoor shooting location of Winter Sonata, rediscovered and turned it into a renowned tourist attraction. Many travel agencies even arrange the travel itinerary of Winter Sonata as their leading sightseeing tours laid on for foreign visitors. As a result, many K-drama fans are attracted to by its reputation and go on a pilgrimage to Namiseom. It is set as a cultural classic in their tourism market and it has achieved great success and is highly valued.
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    Re: rediscovered

    It has helped the unnoticed small island Namiseom, a primary outdoor shooting location of Winter Sonata, to be rediscovered and turned into a renowned tourist attraction.

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    Re: rediscovered

    Quote Originally Posted by Ashiuhto View Post
    As a result, many K-drama fans are attracted to by its reputation and go on a pilgrimage to Namiseom.
    I am not a teacher.

    Either 'attracted to it by' or 'attracted by' but not 'to by'.

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    Re: rediscovered

    Quote Originally Posted by Ashiuhto View Post
    Many travel agencies even arrange the travel itinerary of Winter Sonata as their leading sightseeing tours laid on for foreign visitors.
    Can 'arrange' be replaced with 'make' and 'as' be deleted accordingly?

    Not a teacher.

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