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Ashiuhto

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Please help me correct the following sentences. Thanks!

1. This rush for photo stickers also triggered numerous Taiwanese fans of My Love from the Star transregionally to download photo stickers.
2. Its marketing strategy successfully made the continuous hit from inside the drama to outside.
3. With multifaceted themes and advancing marketing campaign, K-dramas have created an invincible mythology.
 

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What is the purpose of these three sentences? Why have you written them and why do you think they need to be corrected?
 

Ashiuhto

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These sentences are translated from a Chinese article on Electronic Commerce Times (2014/2/24). I consider that they are useful reference materials to enrich my topic report. Admittedly, they are so poorly written in Chinese Pidgin English that it fails to convey the intended meaning. I’m aware of my limitations in English writing, so I posted these threads on the forum, hoping to ask native speakers for help to correct the errors.
 

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Non-native teachers of English are welcome to ask our advice.

Ashiuhto has admitted his/her limitations in post #3.
 

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1. This rush for photo stickers also triggered numerous Taiwanese fans from various regions to download My Love from the Star photo stickers.
2. Its marketing strategy successfully transitioned the series from a hit in the K-drama genre to a more popular international audience.
3. With multifaceted themes and advanced marketing campaigns, K-dramas have become a formidable presence in entertainment.


--lotus
 
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