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  1. Newbie
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    #1

    Correct my letter

    I wrote a letter for my neighbor and I'm not sure if it correct.


    Dear mira,


    I can't believe you're a graduate now, you have grown up so fast.

    Your neighbor
    Sara

    Please correct my text if there are any mistakes.
    Thank you,
    Last edited by Saragun; 18-Sep-2014 at 05:07.

  2. MikeNewYork's Avatar
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    #2

    Re: Correct my letter

    I would change the comma after "now" to a semicolon, and capitalize the "M" in "Mira". I would also put a comma after "neighbor". Otherwise the sentences are fine

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