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    Smile Please check my grammar and sentences

    I am searching for a good job. I already applied in many company's but none of them are selecting me as their good employee. I think my one and only weak part is English. I am trying to improve my English day by day but, it's so hard for me. But still i am trying to improve it, i can use just a simple word and it takes too much time for selecting words while writing. I am unknown about my grammar, and want to know the feedback for my grammar. Now i am testing myself. Please guide me.

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    Re: Please check my grammar and sentences

    I charge more for being a mentor.

    Quote Originally Posted by gurubhai View Post
    I am searching for a good job.
    You're really picky, aren't you? You not only want a job but you want a good job.

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    I have already applied at many companies, but none of them have hired me.
    Stop being so picky, and you might have better luck.

    Quote Originally Posted by gurubhai View Post
    I think my one and only weakness is English.
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    I am trying to improve my English day by day but, it's hard.
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    But still i am trying to improve it. I do have a lot of trouble with word choice.
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    I am unknown about my grammar, and want to know the feedback for my grammar. Now i am testing myself. Please guide me.
    Perhaps:

    I want people to point out my mistakes and show me how to do things the right way.


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    Please again check my grammar and sentences

    Dear Salima, I know you are missing me, but i am not missing you my heart. You know, i don't have enough time to miss u dear. In the morning time, i always go to washroom which takes about 2 hour roughly, after that i must go to church for dancing it also takes more than 3 hours. Dear, washroom church consumed about 5 hours, now i have remaining 6 hours. Then i always go to cinema hall to watch latest movies. Now tell me dear, how can i miss u everyday?

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    #4

    Re: Please again check my grammar and sentences

    If post #3 is an example of one of your job applications, I'm not surprised you haven't got a job yet.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: Please again check my grammar and sentences

    I am confused, gurubhal. Your second post had nothing to do with the first one. Plus, there was no improvement. (Do you think I do corrections just for the fun of it?) You are supposed to note the corrections and use them to help you improve. I have been doing this for quite a while, and the point of it is to help ESL learners improve their English skills, not to watch them flounder like a fish out of water. ("Tarheel" is my second persona on this website.)

    Yes, I do have a weird sense of humor, but they give out prizes for the funniest posts on the website. (OK, not really.)


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    Re: Please again check my grammar and sentences

    Is the job you are applying for "Salima's boyfriend"?
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    #7

    Re: Please check my grammar and sentences

    P.S. Note that "I am unknown about my grammar" is what is known as unintentional humor. (Unlike mine, which is intentional.) You probably don't want to use that sentence again unless you want to inspire snickering.


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