Student or Learner
We need to provide our work details for final accounting upon completion of the each project. As you are aware, we could have taken the necessary information from the system earlier, but now we don't have access to the system. If you could facilitate the system by sharing, we can have access to the system so that we can provide our work details accordingly.
Thank you for helping me to correct my sentences.
I want to say that if we can have the access to the system, we can give our details accordingly. Shall write the last part in my sentences as above?
Thank you for your help
If you could provide us the access to the system again (I presume using security codes), we would then be able to provide the work details for final accounting.If you could facilitate the system by sharing, we can have access to the system so that we can provide our details accordingly.
not a teacher
I guess that's all for now. But remember -- don't try to cram everything you have to say into one really long sentence. Instead, keep your sentences brief and to the point. You want people to understand what you are saying, don't you?