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    The location of both the companies close to the border .... their destination quickly

    It's me again.

    The location of both the companies close to the border with X facilitates transporting devices and spare parts from suppliers in Y land and enables service technicians to reach their destination quickly.

    Does the above sentence sound good to you or should it be a little bit changed?

    The location of both the companies close to the border with X makes it possible/easy to transport devices and spare parts from suppliers in Y land and enables service technicians to reach their destination quickly.

    I would be very grateful for your comments.

    Thank you.

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    Re: The location of both the companies close to the border .... their destination qui

    The first sentence starts out okay but then takes a road less traveled and gets lost. The second sentence is a big improvement.


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