Student or Learner
Today I tried to practice writing only one paragraph about the advantages of immigration, it would be great if you tell me what do you thing or to give me advice:
There are several advantages related to the issue of immigration. First, many people consider going abroad in order to find a wide range of job and study opportunities. It is where they get well paid, and therefore they will acquire a better standard of living. Second, living in a different country from our own gives us the opportunity to discover the culture, customs and traditions of the host community. This leads towards a sense of integration with the locals. Finally, the fruit of immigration is to broaden our horizons and to bless us with a much better experience in life.