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    i need to make a story with some idioms/ figures of speech. can you help me by trying to change some words of my story to make it with little idioms or figures of speech? here it is

    Logro, an IT graduate, has created a program that had impacted his classmates during their thesis making. After graduating from college he decided to sell his product to whoever is interested. Logro, being a shy-type person has not engaged in a dyad with clients yet. One time, he has decided to meet a client, Dionisio, who has seen his product. Unfortunately, because he has lacked enough confidence in facing people he failed to meet Dionisio. Logro really felt discouraged and pathetic of himself. Logro didnít know what to do because of the first failure. Morroco, a close friend of Logro, came to the rescue to support him with his product and advised him on the technique of winning a client. He advised Logro to face the mirror and try to do self-talk. He should also possess, according to Morroco, self-realization that success can be achieved through good communication. Another chance has come to Logro. Kentucky, a merchandiser, knew about his program and he was so amazed when he actually experienced it. Logro being a learned person has win Kentuckyís trust by applying Morrocoís advises. Finally, Logrohas satisfied himself.

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    #2

    Re: heeelp

    That would be doing your homework for you, and we don't do that.

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    #3

    Re: heeelp

    It's also a duplicate post.
    I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.

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    Re: heeelp

    And the word "heeelp" does not exist.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: heeelp

    Quote Originally Posted by emsr2d2 View Post
    And the word "heeelp" does not exist.
    Neither does "thankyouuu".

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