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abuasim

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*correct the text

I am Sadia
I am born in 1986
I am raised by this honored man(father)
I am married and I have tow children girl and boy*
I studied all stages of general education at my village*
after that I got married and moved to Ynbou city because my husband was working there .I lived there 4 years and then moved to Jeddah city and enrolled in Saudi Electronic University*
My hobbies:
I like writing my diary*
I like cooking because the cooking is a wonderful world*
I like drawing to express about my feelings
My wishes:
I want to be obedient for my parents*
I want to get bachular with high degrees*
I want to raise my children in a good way*
Thank you for your time and i hope you enjoy my cv
Pleas correct text*
and write me back
 

HenryLin

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English
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United States
Current Location
United States
All the statement are correct but in some statement above will need a punctuation mark and full-stop.
 
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