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    letter

    Hello
    I must raith a important letter
    And my englesh is not good.

    Exsample to my letter:
    Mrs koren reseve a biological treatment at mdanderson
    She got exsepted to clinical trial for peishent with ovarian cancer stage four.

    Can sam one help me to raith this corectly?

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    Re: letter

    not a teacher

    Hi skoren.
    There are some parts of your post that are not clear. However, because this might be urgent I will try to help you.
    I am not sure what you mean by "mdanderson", but perhaps you mean Dr Anderson MD.

    If so, then here is what I think you are trying to say.
    Mrs Koren has received treatment from Dr Anderson. She has been accepted for a clinical trial as a patient with stage four ovarian cancer.

    Or perhaps Mrs Koren does not have stage four cancer for sure, but is only having a clinical trial.
    Mrs Koren has received treatment from Dr Anderson. She has been accepted as a patient for a clinical trial for stage four ovarian cancer.

    Let us know if you think this is not what you want to say.

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    Re: letter

    Hello
    I need to raite a letter abaut my mom to soshial servise for ask help
    My mom,, mrs koren have four stage ovarian cancer
    She got exsepted to clinical trial at md anderson cancer center in houston
    Now she stay at hospital for treatment

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    Re: letter

    not a teacher

    Thank you for the extra information. Here is what I think you should write in your letter.

    Mrs Koren is receiving treatment at the MD Anderson Cancer Center, Houston. She has been accepted for a clinical trial as a patient with stage four ovarian cancer and is now in the hospital.

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