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    #1

    send email

    Hi there ,I need to get some information about to obtain MSc courses in Architecture Design . Many thanks in advance!

    To whom it may concern

    Request for MSc for Architecture Design

    I am currently graduated from Architecture Design in Egypt. I am interested in your MSc in Architecture Design .

    I am writing to you with the desire to top up to . I am highly interested in attending your university. I would appreciate to know if you are happy to consider late applications and further information.


    Thank you for considering my application. I look forward to your acceptance.

    Sincerely yours,

    [Name removed]
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    Last edited by emsr2d2; 06-Oct-2014 at 18:20.

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    Re: send email

    not a teacher

    It pays to be specific as to the type of information you require, whether it is information on how to apply, deadlines, course information, entrance requirements, costs, etc. It is not clear from your letter what your intention is.

    What do you mean by 'desire to top up to'?

    The opening address should be 'dear sir/madam'.

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    #3

    Re: send email

    If one is going to open a letter with "Dear Sir/Madam", the words should be capitalized.

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    #4

    Re: send email

    'To whom it may concern' is just fine, tedmc.

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    Re: send email

    Rover

    Which is preferred in the opening address of a letter, 'to whom it may concern' or 'dear sir/madam'?

    not a teacher

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