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    Smile translation problem

    Hello,
    I am from Russia. I work at a hotel.
    I have to translate some information from Russian into English and I am not sure if the following sentences are OK.
    So, could you please correct them:
    "Today the Karelia hotel is the only hotel in Petrozavodsk where you can find all necessary facilities and services for organization of seminars and conferences meeting high-level standards."
    And " Organizing meetings and seminars at our hotel, you get the highest-level services and have the unique chance to visit the world-famous islands of Kizhi and Valaam and enjoy rafting, hunting and fishing, snowmobile tours and many others as well."
    These phrases seem to me rather heavy and "awkward".
    Thank you for your help.
    Liudmila

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    Re: translation problem

    How about

    "Today the Karelia Hotel is the only hotel in Petrozavodsk where you can find all the necessary facilities and services for organizing seminars and conferences at high-level standards."


    " When organizing meetings and seminars at our hotel, you get the best services and have the unique chance to visit the world-famous islands of Kizhi and Valaam where you can enjoy rafting, hunting,fishing,snowmobile tours and many other activities."

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