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    amusement equipments

    Here are some Chinese Pidgin English sentences as written. Please help me correct them. Thanks!

    1. When I was small, I visited an amazing place. It is named Tokyo Disneyland, where it brought me a lot of fun. You can play a lot of amusement equipment and enjoy the scenery there.

    2. When I was small, I visited an amazing place—Tokyo Disneyland, which brought me a lot of fun. You can play a lot of amusement equipment and enjoy the scenery there.

    3. But the funniest thing for me is the Disney All Stars parade.

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    Let's see your attempt to correct them first.

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    These sentences were written by a student in his writing class. They confused me.

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    Re: amusement equipments

    I think you can tell which parts are confusing, then the teachers will help you.

    I am not a teacher.
    Last edited by Matthew Wai; 11-Oct-2014 at 16:53. Reason: typo

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    Re: amusement equipments

    Quote Originally Posted by Ashiuhto View Post
    These sentences were written by a student in his writing class. They confused me.
    This is not a satisfactory answer to "Let's see your attempt to correct them first". You are an English teacher. You must become more proficient at correcting your students yourself. What will you do if this website crashes for a few days? Would you tell your students you can't correct their work until you can get back on here?
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: amusement equipments

    Quote Originally Posted by emsr2d2 View Post
    What will you do if this website crashes for a few days?
    The OP has also asked questions on anther forum, under the name of contiluo.

    Not a teacher.

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