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    please check my writing ^^

    Today was my 29th birthday. I got so many blessings from the God and my friends since morning. One of the blessing was a magpie; it is considered a bird of good luck in Asia. It sang so loudly and seemed like singing a birthday song to me. Next blessing was a little girl's shouting. After the magpie's loud twitter, an unknown girl shouted three times "I love you" from the outside. I felt like it is a strong love message from the God. I was so pleased and thrilled! I realized how much the God loves me and cares about my meaningful 29th birthday. Moreover, my best friends congratulated me with my favorite flavor of cake, milk cream cake that in fashion, and amazing gifts. We had wonderful dinner together and great tea time at the cafe which has a beautiful city view. It was an unforgettably amazing birthday party ever and I hope we keep our friendship last forever.
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    Re: please check my writing ^^

    Welcome to the forum.

    When will you submit your piece of writing for marking/grading?
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Question Re: please check my writing ^^

    Quote Originally Posted by emsr2d2 View Post
    Welcome to the forum.

    When will you submit your piece of writing for marking/grading?

    Sorry? I don't understand

    It's my first time to use this website so I don't exactly know the rules ..

    How do I submit my piece of writing?

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    #4

    Re: please check my writing ^^

    You have already posted it here. When are you going to give it to your English teacher in South Korea?
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: please check my writing ^^

    oh it's not for hwk or something.

    I just try to study English myself but I need some help for writing.

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