I have been keeping an eye on HK demonstration. I feel sorry about what has happened to HK. I really hope that Hongkies can achieve what they fight for! I read your comments about HK. I can't find any particular mistake, besides, some words have to be plurals or singular and some prepositions needed in between the sentences. I am sure you can find those mistakes by reread it over again. Well, I am not an English teacher. But, I believe that your messages are very clear. After reading your post, I have a deeper understanding about how Hongkies feel toward the current political environment. I used to visit HK once a month over two years. I like HK very much. Oh, I would suggest to put capital letter for "Central" since it is a place in HK. Cantonese is my native as well. Ni hou mou?
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