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[yousif4ever]

• Hello, this is Yousif Mark. I am preparing for the English language examination. I am studying both English and Network at the same time in an attempt to become proficient in both subjects. You recommended that I learn more English and I am working at that. I am reading a lot of essays and newspaper articles, plus listening to the news in English. It will soon be a month since we met. I want to pursue my dream major by continuing to take this Network course and developing my mastery of English. I would like to take the English examination as soon as possible. Can you set a specific time for the test? Thanking you in advance for you help, regards,
  Yousif Mark

 

[Tarheel]

• Hello, this is Yousif Mark. I am preparing for the English language examination. I am studying both English and Network at the same time in an attempt to become proficient in both subjects. You recommended that I learn more English, and I am working at that. I am reading a lot of essays and newspaper articles, plus listening to the news in English. It will soon be a month since we met. I want to pursue my dream major by continuing to take this Network course and developing my mastery of English. I would like to take the English examination as soon as possible. Can you set a specific time for the test? Thank you for you help.
• Regards,
  Yousif Mark

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[probus]

I wouldn't change a thing except to agree with Tarheel's punctuation.