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    Kindly check the sentences which I wanted to use as a main heading in my SOP

    Dear Sir/Madam,
    Here is the sentence which I wanted to write as a main heading in my STATEMENT OF PURPOSE. Kindly check the sentence and let me know if there are any corrections to be made.

    1. 'It is not just a Statement of Purpose...It is a crusade for accomplishing my passion on research.'
    2. 'I wouldn't call it just a Statement of Purpose...I name it as a crusade for
    accomplishing my passion on research instead.'
    3. 'It is not just a Statement of Purpose...After all, it is a crusade for accomplishing my passion on research.'

    Thank you a lot for your time.

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    Re: Kindly check the sentences which I wanted to use as a main heading in my SOP

    1. ..passion for research.

    2. I am not sure the word 'crusade' can be applied to research. Crusade is a struggle or a campaign.

    3. 'accomplish my passion'
    Passion is great enthusiasm. You say you accomplish your objectives, mission, task, etc., not 'accomplish passion'.

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    Re: Kindly check the sentences which I wanted to use as a main heading in my SOP

    Thank you a lot for your time and reply.

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    Re: Kindly check the sentences which I wanted to use as a main heading in my SOP

    Hello Sir/Madam,

    Could you kindly let me know the word which can supplant accomplish?

    Could you kindly let me know the above all sentence structures are correct?

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    Re: Kindly check the sentences which I wanted to use as a main heading in my SOP

    1. It common to say: to fuel a passion.

    2. You don't use .... or shortforms in serious writing.

    3.' A statement of purpose' should be in small letters.

    4. The sentences are OK, I prefer the 1st sentence.

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    Re: Kindly check the sentences which I wanted to use as a main heading in my SOP

    Quote Originally Posted by pranavvemula View Post
    Thank you a lot for your time and reply.
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